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raykong -> RE: Zoids: Battle Century - History of Zi. (18/2/2012 5:14:58 AM)
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Very cool, and very interesting concept and execution as well. Reading your story kinda felt like I was studying for a history test, which is a good thing since that feels like what you're going for. The parallels between your Zoidaryians' sociocultural evolution and mankind's own are very evident too; bringing to mind civilizations of classic antiquity. Overall an interesting take on your fanverse, and aside from a few minor spelling/grammar errors, the story itself is quite solid. The only negative feedback I could give would be that not everyone might like this style of storytelling, but I personally enjoyed it. The last sentence was also my favorite line. ;)
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